All Comments on 'Milk Sow Ch. 07'

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danalearnsdanalearnsabout 15 years ago
good development

i like how you are continuing to develop this story and i hope there is more to come.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Oh yes...

..by all means keep this going. Very erotic.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
oh yes good development

let her fall in love with the master of the machine to be her master and let him love to have his own milk sow at home where he can demonstrate for instance for young farmers how everything works with additional profit for her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Submission

The highlight of this one, I thought, was not the erotic sex part, but the insights into Ginnysow's mind, her descent from human wife to private milksow. Those were some of the best parts, seeing her mentality break down as she starts to admit what she is and what she wants to do.

By the same token, it was sad to see their marriage start to break down. And the comment about Matt left me curious- has be been there and used her more since the demonstration?

He said she'd come back to the farm eventually- but with a self-fucking milking machine, what more could she want?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Interesting psychological developments .

Ginnysows thought process's are the most interesting part now . I think the Master of the machine would have complete control of her . It seems to me that Ben would have a great time fucking Ginnysow while she was being milked and it would have made made them closer both sexually and emotionally .At least I would have found it hot . While her emotions are altered by all her hormones don't forget she didn't suddenly go from being a smart woman to being mentally retarded .While women can go through some really radical emotional shifts during puberty ,pregnancy , and menopause ,they don't suddenly get stupid . A smart woman is still a smart woman ,it just seems that thier emotions , to certain degree direct how they use thier intelligence . It also gets the ladies angry when their body tells them one thing and thier brain says another . It's one of the things that makes women so interesting to live with .

Why did you choose to call them Milk Sows ? It just seems that milk cow would have fit better as no one milks sows " female pigs " other then piglets .

Really enjoy your story keep writting .

crazeeboy123crazeeboy123about 9 years ago
Anti-climax

Apart from the machine,Ginny's life back home is an absolute anti - climax,add to that the thought of going back to her office, I cannot see her settling in to her previous existence .

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Started good then went down

Why do you have to have her turn into a mindless toy and the husband so pathetic? This would be so hot if they did this together to sell more machines and do demos. Why have her become so mindless and then the husband be so a bitch? This is because of him. He shares equal blame. He just pisses me off now. Which. Again is why it would be so much hotter if they both kept their brains and got kinky hot sex with the machine too. And went into business together

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