All Comments on 'Milkers'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Nothing

better than hot milk..............

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Great story line!

Dynamite story. You need t keep this going. Chapter 2 should highlight the four of them getting together for a "milking." BTW, to readers who have never savored mother's milk, it's a blast!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Milk and Consquences

So does he knock both women up?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
A little sophomoric

This sounds like it was written by the author of a bad pulp fiction novel, or even worse, a romance novelist gone bad. I especially liked this line:

" `Not while she's in the shower.' Steve could feel the veins in his head pulsing with excitement."

You know, a little aspirin will help take care of that headache.

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I lean towards erotica of the absurd. Nothing like a laugh in the middle of what is pretty ridiculous stuff... (Or maybe it's just the way I do it.) Have got into futanari/dick-girl stories in the past couple of years. The more fantastical the better.