All Comments on 'Mimic Ch. 11'

I like this story more of the two you have submitted. Mimic is a unique character and would like to hear more about how he was created and more about the creature that gave up its life in order for Mimic to live.

I think about this story often, a magical place that is worth exploring.

That was unexpected.

Even for this story.

I love your work. I've read both Inkwell and now this and thoroughly enjoyed both. I would love to read more of your works and think that I would love to read the continued adventures of Zerret.

Is there a cliffnotes for this?? I'm still confused. I feel like this has as many levels of dissection as Shakespeare. So the Jinn took over the other dragon half instead of just splitting them? Or was the Dragon not actually split? How did halving anyone help hide any secrets as wouldn't there be more bodies aware of being halved? Who from outside was attacking and why would they want Passion dead? Especially if they were halved too, wouldn't they be going after a perceived threat not a guild thief? If I'm missing that the Jinn controlled the other halves then why were there attackers outside at all if they're in a bottle? How did sex end up the solution of Zerret remained himself? Did Loc kill Lox as part of being the Jinn? If so then why - I see no reason for this. I have more questions than Rincitni put on paper. Which also was confusing, she couldn't read but could write? And the Mimic just happened upon having magic capabilities to make the bed but only that because hiding the room was part of his mimicry? I mean knowing a spell is one thing but using one another. Yeah I definitely need cliffnotes.

I should clarify, i did like the story and I'm amazed at your creativity. I got so wrapped up in the characters and the world you created. I just missed a lot of points that others seemed to understand.