All Comments on 'Mind and Matters'

This was a fairly fresh idea, and well told. I enjoyed it very much. Good job.

And different. You have a way with being on the edge and yet with a class to your writing.

Unlike any story I've read here and pretty freakin' amazing. That obviously took a lot of work and talent - thank you.

Very intriging story- A little bit for everyone. However, I would like to see a little more detail on the prep for entering- smearing lube, etc. Draw it out a little rather than heading right into it. Have you written more?

Just perfect

That was absolutely amazing!

Denise appeared in the last chapter. How did she appear out of nowhere ??

Well constructed and with fabulous momentum. Thanks for the entertainment...

but really well written and entertaining. Though some content is not in my wheelhouse, I have to appreciate the work and and imagination... Good job.

That was erotic, intense, and emotional. Well written. Great job.