All Comments on 'Mind Control Party'

Don't go any further with this garbage. I would be embarassed to admit I even thought of this more or less wrote it.

Too bad I can't give this story less than 00. This sorry excuse for a story is absolute CRAP!!!!!

It IS mind control after all. I'm not sure what the other two people who commented are so upset about about. Would have liked to hear the details of the whole night and the morning after, though.

Good but could have used a lot more about how the other men fucked her. I'd love to see her fucked a lot more.

With how the story ends, I feel like it leaves with more to be desired, however, over all I think it's a pretty decent story and would love to see a rewrite to mold it fuller.

can't wait for the next one. :)

This was very well done. Rachel's moment of realization (Oh my God...I've got to get out of here) was brilliant. My only complain agrees with the previous two comments in that the story was too short. I was disappointed not to read about the rest of the night, and how the drug wearing off was dealt with. Unfortunately, as the author has not posted anything since this story was written over two years ago, I don't expect to see a Part II.

The girl's reactions and the weird method of mind controll and the overall nonerotic feeling of this story just don't do it for me

One of the worst story I've ever read on here.

This kid is EXTREMELY SICK