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He helped her to stand. “Come on upstairs and I’ll give you a real good shower.”
That was okay with her.
On the way up the stairs, the portly man offered Rachel the jug of water. “Have a few gulps of this, please. I want you to give me a shower, too.”
Rachel didn’t know what the connection was, but she did as she was told.
All night long, she did as she was told.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 12 years agoThe girl's reactions and the weird method of mind controll and the overall nonerotic feeling of this story just don't do it for me
Anonymousover 17 years agoThis was very well done. Rachel's moment of realization (Oh my God...I've got to get out of here) was brilliant. My only complain agrees with the previous two comments in that the story was too short. I was disappointed not to read about the rest of the night, and how the drug wearing off was dealt with. Unfortunately, as the author has not posted anything since this story was written over two years ago, I don't expect to see a Part II.
