by sweetnpetite
You did a fine job. Quite a delicious story of two women and...oh, God bless women!!! muhahahhahaha
On one level, an extremely hot masturbation story. But on another, a very tender tale of emerging love. Very well done!
i've read this story several times and fingered myself franticaly each time!
This last time i showed it to a friend of mine and we both read it out to each other and fingered ourselves.
I think (and hope)it grows to so much more!!!
thank you... what a wonderful story of two people coming together, learning, growing together and enjoying each other.
Good balance of all of the elements, and excellent grammar and syntax.
Obviously by a woman that knows her anatomy well....from much use. As a Bi male I am turned on lesbian prose. Sometimes I even masturbate to it...% stars to YOU..