by DreamerOne
oh it was so good! i loved this story. it was very sexy, with lots of anticipation and just a lovely concept.
i love this,its majorly creative and suspenseful enough that it makes you not wanna stop reading it.great job!
and i love the last bit with the mirrors in the ceiling very cute :P
At first the story was subtle and don't-wanna-put-down interesting, then by the second page it was sex-desire, cock-throbbing, sweat-drenching sexuality. Keep writing
I loved your imagination with this story. The sensuous pleasures of seeing through the mirror but not being able to touch were filled with such remorseful longing. The desolate despair John felt when Darren disappeared tore me apart. Superb tension and anticipation were created when Alex said his friend was waiting at his home. Their first love making was expertly written. So lustful, so beautiful, so romantic.
A fantastic use of mirrors. The scene where they undress and tease and masturbate together was so hot. And then the meeting and how both Darren and John were just meant to be together, just perfect. And the last line just tied everything together so beautifully. Just a lovely heartwarming story.
Oh my God!!! This is definitely one of my favorite stories on this site. So romantic. So perfect. Love the supernatural element as well.