All Comments on 'Miss Aphrodite'

I am a very big fan of the Teacher/Professor versus student scenario. This was well written, all the basics as in spelling & grammar seemed very good and you took us on a nice POV through this kid's head. He sure had some fun with it and I am hopeful you are working on chapter #2, you could take this a few more chapters and the readers should enjoy it, I sure will!!

An original twist on a very old plot, played beautifully by the characters who were well aware of how clichéd it was. Sex was hot, dialogue was excellent, story was interesting. More please!

Very well done. I totally agree with another comment, nice twist on an old scenario. Keep stories coming.

This first effort is very well written and paced, with the jealous friend adding a nice counter point.

Could be the start of a series, too.

... story based on the classic but effective premise of the hot teacher. And who hasn't had that fantasy once in a while? Impressive first effort from the author. I can't wait to see what he/she will produce in the future.

If you hadn't said this was a first submission, I would be looking for more of your work. This is a excellent variant of a classic tale. You handled it with the skill and experiance of an experienced writer.

I look forward to more from you.

-Fyre

You have a talent and thanks for sharing your work with us. Very impressive debut story, hope you will continue to write. Good job

Thankyou for your excellent story,,,, I am eagerly awaiting the sequels

very nice 1st submission hope there is a sequel to this

You're a very good writer. What a first submission! I look forward to your future efforts.

I don't know what to say about this, i could gush endless praise for hours and still not feel like i truly encompassed the scope of my love for this particular piece of fiction. It made me want to write, it made me want to be a better writer, it made me, if I'm honest, slightly jealous because it was a spectacular first piece and I'd love to see you continue something which i believe (my own assumption after reading) you are eager to continue.

Very nice story. I enjoyed it greatly. I wish you focused a bit more on the emotions, but the descriptions of sex are scintillating.

You must have others. Fantastic first submission. I think you left every reader wanting more.

For a debut story, this was pretty spectacular. Bravo to you! I hope you do produce the sequels you promised if this is any indication as to how good those would be.

Many stories (like sexual experiences) lack anticipation and patience, and rush to the main event. Graphic details are provided prematurely, thus being too graphic and too intense. Words are used repetitively, non-creatively, or are unsuccessfully strung together in an effort to sound eloquent, but instead turn into an unwelcome mental hike across the jagged and ill-fitting sentences. All of which are obviously a turn off and make the stories no longer worth one's time.

Your story is the polar opposite. It is incredibly and effortlessly articulate, descriptive, fluid, and arousing. Wow. You have a natural way with words, with timing, and with making the universal sexual acts that many of us are all too familiar with and intrinsically crave for, to sound brand new and utterly exciting. It would have been nice to know what the student looked like, yet not knowing lets us fill in the blanks.

I can't wait to see more of your work.

U r an exceptionally great writer,I am eagerly waiting 4 d sequel...d best story i read in literotica till date...terrific indeed!!keep up the great writing :)

but it has been three years without a follow-up so I'm guessin' the author won't see this comment. Shame, I would have enjoyed Chapter 2. I would have enjoyed a little more background on the heroine. Why exactly did this ravishing accomplished beauty pick some student, seemingly at random, as a lover. What kink don't we know about her?

You published this 7-1/2 years ago, stating that it was your first such and that if response was favorable, you had a couple of sequels in mind. I see they didn't materialize. I have not read the 17 other comments, but here is some praise for you.This was delightfully well-written, with proper punctuation, sentence structure, and spelling as well as subtle humor ("Fuckin' A!" he exclaimed. I wish I was.) Such skillful delivery is rare on Literotica.com and a welcome addition.

I'm sure you have your reasons for not following up--possibly having to do with writing for money, given your ability--but I will heartily welcome anything else you choose to send our way. Bravo!