by callida
I`ve been looking forward to Ch. 3 for a very long time!!! It`s well written, but I must say that it seems that Whitham has lost his edge, Constance was too willing, and while I didn`t love the fact that he hit her. It just showed that he had a rough side to him. I was hoping when he next came to Constance she would be bruised and angry and ready to make him feel like s#%t for what he did and that while he was sorry about it he would force her again anyway because he is that obsessed with her. Please don`t make us wait another year for Ch. 4!!!!
This is the first piece of your work that I've come across, and I'm mightily impressed. I'm going to the beginning of this series to catch the rest of the plot line, but I just wanted to take a moment to say good job.
OMG you MUST write more! Now! This is so very well written that waiting for more is criminal. Please? More? Soon...pretty please?
I love this story because it's deliciously erotic. The writing is so wonderful and enthralling that I really get pulled into the story; character and plot are so HOT! I would love to read more installments. thanks
Please, you have to finish this story, it is too amazing not to.
While your story is not without flaw, for this site it is very well written and actually held my interest.
Please, come back, I'm eager to know how can she forgive him. I belive that these are the best writen characters I've read.
it's simply wonderful..and really something different ..i love it so far but i do hope you write the rest of it though it has been quite awhile since you posted last..please finish the story..
I loved it soo much! I hope you finish it soon! I beg of you!!
Please come back and continue the story! You have a gift and should share it. Please post some more.
Your story is one of my favorite stories and it really is a shame that you decided not to continue. I hope our words of encouragement will bring you to realise that there are people out there who are enjoying your story.
This is an interesting story - I hope you continue at some point.
Please continue!! its interesting to see the 2 parts of his personality - its clear that he cares about her and possibiliy used this as an chance to get her w/o realizing his feelings but he's also shown flashes of possessiveness and caring. Very interested to see where you go next! I hope he redeems himself and I also enjoy that she doesn't give up some resistance but struggles w. her old feelings for him.
This story is amazing, and I love it. But you really need to upload it. I really want to see how this story ends, it really is one of my favourite stories on here.
I am so disappointed that you have never finished this story. Good historical romance/noncon stories are few and far between, and I'm sure lots of people (me included) would be grateful and entertained if you kept posting!
this is a great story and i would love to know what happens next ?
this is my favourite story on the whole site, i've read it hundreds of times. if you updated it would make me so happy! i know you might not go on this much anymore but if you see this message then please please think about writing more. you are such a great writer, this story is perfect, PLEASE FINISH!
Please, please, please finish this story! You're a marvelous writer.
I'm marvelling at how natural the speech sounds in your writing. The action is incredibly erotic and wonderful, yes, but the dialogue really enhances it. I'm loving both Whitham and Constance and would love to see more of them.
I really wish that you had finished this story. It's definitely my favourite story on here and I've read it dozens of times. Every time I try and find a story like this I never quite can and just end up rereading this one. It's not just the plot, which I love, that brings me back but also your writing. I can really picture everything that's happening, and flow is really good. I never have to pause to figure out what it is your trying to say which happens with a lot of other authors, and I find it ruins the story a bit.
I also love the dynamic between the two. James is clearly confused about how he feels about her, like he didn't realise before how it felt and the whole thing with her brother sparked him to act on those feelings. And she obviously had a crush on him, I wonder if she would ever have told him about it.
I think it would be interesting to hear what they talked about in the gardens, as a prologue of some sort. Obviously that won't happen as I doubt our ever going to continue with this story. But if you do see this know that there are people who would love you to continue.
This could be a really great story if it hadn’t ended so abruptly. That’s why I’m giving it a 3. You need to finish it someday.