All Comments on 'Miss Mabel Ch. 02'

by potsherd22

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Scotsman69Scotsman69almost 11 years ago
Most promising.

I look forward to this unfolding.

teedeedubteedeedubalmost 11 years ago
Pretty clever

And well written. Thanks......

TheOldRomanticTheOldRomanticover 7 years ago
Is that a true romance?

I'm starting to have doubts about whether this story is a Romance or another category ...

Anyway, I still give you 5 *.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

Horseman68Horseman68almost 7 years ago
Very Intriguing Beginning.

Hoping for more of the best.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Yet another gutless, talentless British fag with no writing skill whatsoever !

This writer is a liar and a cheat. It cheats on it's ratings ! Most of it's stories have 0 favorites and yet have rating of 4.7 !!! Only very few have rating of 10 and less! I think that web Mistress should look at this disgrace. 1* of course !

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