All Comments on 'Miss Noble Ch. 01'

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clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 15 years ago
Excellent writing

Excellent writing and pace. Good development. I wanted to keep reading to find out what happened. Hope you will write more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
good idea but too long and drawn out

the story was based on very good idea but was too long and drawn out in areas, mainly when describing things, (for example the sister). hope to see part 2 soon though

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved it

Can't wait for the next edition!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Boring

Long and drawn out. Utter crap.

Kris42Kris42over 15 years ago
exciting and raunchy

Exciting and raunchy....would love to here more from these characters. I do agree that some areas were too drawn out but I loved it all the same :-)

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 15 years ago
Damn, Damn,Damn!!!!

The author must be into torture or sadism,to end the chapter, JUST as the young dude is about to eat her pussy!That is just wrong, really wrong. Some readers would call it mean spirited, evil, and against all laws of erotic reading. Never, never , never should a story stop just when a young lad is about to sink his tongue into a hot wet older woman's pussy and drink all of her sweet nectar that flows from her womanhood. Damn, Damn, Damn. Good story though....Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Good Stuff

Well written and good storyline.

many thanks, Jane Marwood

jayblomjayblomover 1 year ago

It was really good, but 13+ years is an awful long time for a follow up.....

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