by SullivaenMackaene
Excellent writing and pace. Good development. I wanted to keep reading to find out what happened. Hope you will write more.
the story was based on very good idea but was too long and drawn out in areas, mainly when describing things, (for example the sister). hope to see part 2 soon though
Exciting and raunchy....would love to here more from these characters. I do agree that some areas were too drawn out but I loved it all the same :-)
The author must be into torture or sadism,to end the chapter, JUST as the young dude is about to eat her pussy!That is just wrong, really wrong. Some readers would call it mean spirited, evil, and against all laws of erotic reading. Never, never , never should a story stop just when a young lad is about to sink his tongue into a hot wet older woman's pussy and drink all of her sweet nectar that flows from her womanhood. Damn, Damn, Damn. Good story though....Rich