by jezebeldelilah
Though it did cut off a little abruptly. Also, I have to say thankyou, thankyou, thankyou! for using 'piqued' instead of 'peaked'(it's one of my pet peeves :)
Very well written and enjoyable to read; a good story line and cast of characters. Good luck in life, teaching and continued success in writing.
Details, details, it's all in the details. Plot line, character development, no big rush to sex part. A truly enjoyable read. Hope to see more.........
I liked it very much. Both characters were fun, and you felt for both of them. ;)
with who ever said the ending was rather abrupt.before that,the story had a nice building up. i liked the sweetness of the characters. he was the hero that women want-attractive,employed,had money,polite,caring,alpha. she was the heroine with guts,refusing to be taken advantage of,independant,a bit of a tease,but still able to be the girl(not a bitch). a sweet storytale. good job.
Just would be a shame if I didn't say, Great.
Thank you.