by gymmyt
What’s brilliant about this story is that it’s very close to being a reality. It’s all plausible. Well written. Part two?
Enjoyed, but your math doesn't add up. Mom is 34, and has been married for 19 years, you're just over 18. So, parents got married at 15, she had you at 16? distracted from the story. ijs
Do'nt understand the adverse comments. This is one really hot tale of incestuous sex.USA
i liked it, but i think it could have been developed more, perhaps with the mom getting pregnant, and the son wondering who the daddy was, but a nice story well told i thought
Your writing is quite good but I have to think that a foot long cock in the brown hole doesn't go in that easily. If you're giving a huge member to your character, play with that characteristic more realisticly.
I agree that this story would have potential for a follow-up if the son didn't switch place with his dad. His mom realising what she had done would make an interesting story.
Why is it when people write storys It becomes like a fishermans tale, things get over enlarged ;) Sometime it is better to keep it short like an advert, and we all enjoy an advert:)
This story was OK; but somehow your stories are more believable and raunchier when you write from a girl's perspective
However your photo is delicious from MY perspective
but this boy messed up! what he should have done is while his mother and father and himself were standing together sometime the next day he should have asked his father why he stayed in the den all night instead of coming to sleep on the air matress as planned.do this while making strong eye contact with his mother!! lol that would have been an interesting reaction.
nice story,
don