by MissLisaJones
Perfection in a refreshing new way to tell a D/s story. This is a must read!!!
Some authors might find it difficult to regain their skill coming off a layoff, but with Grandmistress Lisa Jones the outcome is never in doubt--and everyone is totally out, and there's no question everyone is coming when Grandmistress Lisa Jones is telling the story. Great plot, as always, and believable characters. Welcome back, GMLJ!
Thorough bit of writing. Erotic without being overdone, and the psychological play is very nice. First time I've seen a story of this type (where the dom's are hired cast) and I'm very impressed with how you've handled it. 5 stars.
I have so enjoyed your story. The plot twist of being the wrong girl, just adds so much to the feeling of helplessness. More pleease.
I read this story months ago. I guess it really stuck with me, because I found myself thinking about it today. I'm so glad I was able to remember who wrote it and find it again. Really enjoyed this one!
And not always the right ones. "In the decade or so since she had left collage". It should be 'college'.