All Comments on 'Mister Jack Miller Ch. 10'

I really enjoyed this collections of stories. Dont stop writing...ever. You moved my world.

its thats an ending, i'm kind of dissapointed. it was a little bit anti-climatic and didn't leave much for the imagination

The whole series has been excellent,but I feel that the ending(?) was an anticlimax.Admittedly I could not think of a different one either,so perhaps its all well tat ends well.Congratulations on a gret series.

It's good to read a story where the husband comes out on top after having a cheating wife. I hope to read more of your stories in the future.

I think he should retire, buy a tropical island somewhere and take his harem there.

I liked the ending. It gave final closure to a great story. I mean, I want more of your stories, so lets not use up all your ideas at one go.

Excellent tale well told. Looking forward to another one

This has been one of the most enjoyable stories that I've read here. Truthfully I favorably compare it with RobInAz's "A Weekend With Three Angels" for pure sensuality, though that story's still evolving after 38 chapters, and sheer enjoyment of reading.

I do hope a sequel is planned, though the ending seemed pretty concise.

Best wishes,

Kydreamer

Loved this story all the way. I must admit I expected him to decide on one of the two choices--Shari and Donna.

But he couldn't fuck them all if he married one.

Assuming he would honor the code his wife didn't.

So, I can't think of a different ending, either.

The only women Jack didn't fuck was his mother, the V twins, his aunts , his cousins and Nana. I know fucking his 100 year old Nana was probably asking for too much, but I was hoping. At least she could have taken her dentures out and given Jack a blow job. PS The puffies were great.

Sorry I could give 5. Sorry it had to end. Sorry - really! - about the anal bit with Janelle. And sorry I'm not Mister Jack Miller.

Not at all sorry to have read the best series, ever, in the history of erotica.

I just hope you'll settle down, think of another plot - and give us some more outstanding reading.

Luke

This is one of the best series I have read so far. The story line was excellent and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story. I hope that this is not the last of your writing as I would love to read more.

It is a real shame that you have posted nothing else in the five years since you posed this story. Put some of the other stories you mentioned at the beginning on your page here at Literotica.

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As the <B>Comment"</B> title states "<B>A good story and well told.</B>". I didn't notice any significant writing errors, there were two places where a different word would have been better.

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Thank you~~ I enjoyedthe story~~

David

I read the entire series and I have to say this was awesome!!!!

Loved this story all the way. I must admit I expected him to decide on one of the two choices--Shari and Donna.

But he couldn't fuck them all if he married one.

Assuming he would honor the code his wife didn't.

So, I can't think of a different ending, either.

Very well constructed, great story flow. More please.

Great story wish you would come back and do more !!!!!!!!!!

Had me hooked all the way, and loved the close out. Love to see you do more work 😎