All Comments on 'Mistletoe Treat'

Everyone else is fucking person after person after person. Him? From what I can tell, Dawn and Ruth. Granted, making this 1st person kinda required him being a watcher, but that would have been easy to fix. Write in 3rd person and have him get some, too. As is, though it's from his POV and that is our opening into the story, he was detached and, therefore, so was the story.

I think this story would have been a little better with more of a description of the other women and what exactly was happening to them, but I still enjoyed it.

All of the men have lost any respect they may have once had for their old boss and Dawn. Dawn leaves her husband behind and goes off to be repeatedly gangbanged and never again returns to her husband.

You can tell his employees really liked and respected him. His wife really respected him too! I always liked a wife who was a whore in bed and a lady out of it. Not everybody's whore in and out of bed. Oh well, I bet they were really happy and her whoring made their marriage even stronger! lol

For all the action, this story kept my attention without having to go back to figure out what was going on. The blending went very smoothly.

Who doesn't love a party like that, I know I do.

Loved it.

Anna