All Comments on 'Mitch & Kelli Make a Deal'

Great! Nicely told.

Lukas

Highly erotic yet not spilling over with gooey wet dripping sex. I like the way you jump right into the story assuming we know the couple. I think that puts the reader more in the story than length introductions.. Good Job and thanks very much for the hard on! Now back to some more of your stories!

Mmm, fantastic, sweet, and sexy! I love their gentle flirting. Really lovely description of the strip-tease too.