All Comments on 'Mix It Up: The Private Place'

I definitely see multiple possibilities for where the story could go from here - good start, and welcome to Literotica :-)

I loved the character of Mix. Very realistic. More please!

What a pleasant surprise to read a story entirely different from all the others .Please keep it going .

I've been searching Literotica for a while for a well-written, somewhat realistic, and entertaining incest story. I read both of your story submissions, and all I can say is keep it going! You're off to a great start on exactly the kind of stories I've been looking for! I'm anxious to keep reading. Thanks for reminding me why I come to Literotica.

BTW, if you advance this story with later chapters, I'm sure I'll be rating you at 100.

I want to read more about Mix! When will we see Chapter 2?