by Southernsweetie554
Love the writing style for a beginner. The passion, love and lust between Father and Daughter is there for all to read and enjoy. Keep this storyline going for a few more Chapter, please. Thank you.
I really liked this story. It was great to see how the daughter teased her dad.
goes a long way and it revved daddy's engine to the red line. Nicely continued from Chapter 1, I enjoyed it immensely, thanks.
I love how well you've developed the characters just in this installment. The fact that they seem like real people makes the story that much hotter.
What a wonderfully well written story! Do you plan to continue it? Please keep up the good work and I will keep an eye out for your next one. It makes me wonder what would have happened if I had had a daughter, very hot and very well done....Thanks!
Atlasxx
You've done it again! What a lovely story. I feel that you are using Molly as a substitute for your own desires, are you not? Wish I could be your Dad, in that case.
Nice storytline - I like the daddy/daughter teen seductress theme. Molly is the one making the running and daddy finds her so hot that he just can't help himself. Strong sexual tension naturally leading to a healthy release for both.
You've done it again! Please keep up the good work and I will keep an eye out for your next one... Thank you!
This is really beautiful.... wish you could continue this series.