by Dr Kink
One of the best stories on incest I have read. Thought adding or mentioning the possibility of both ladies being pregnant would be an interesting twist..as to who is the father?
Great character development. Great buildup of the sexual tension with the stories told by Sam and great conclusion. This should be a series. Please do more sotires about these four people. They are terrific!
The plot hinges on fantasies being realized - very nice. But the story could have pushed along a little faster.
Thanks for really hot well written story! As huge fan of full family incest and being bi, would have enjoyed further explorations and defiantly hope to read of some bi betwen four and Phil and Mary introduceing kids to being fucked by many at a swinger's party! Don't know which had me hotter, mother-son or Dad and daughter-in-law?
Please treat to more episodes with these four hot fuckers! loved the way you had the kids connive their way into Sam's parents pants! Bravo!
the tease was great, having the spouses go first was a nice twist. i agree with some other comments - i like stories with more dialogue - but i thought this one was very well told. very erotic. 5 stars!
Good story with a different slant on wife swapping, i.e. the incest between the mother and son. I hope you will continue this story as all four of them go to the swingers club together - and make it an incest swingers club too.
That was well written, except for the word underwear, that is how it is spelled.
English is only my 2nd language, so what would I know ?
Proofreading is important, much better than being embarrassed by silly mistakes.
Sorry about that, I hope there are no hard feelings.
This was a somewhat different approach to the subject which I appreciated. Unfortunately, the poor proof reading with many grammatical and spelling errors spoiled the story and made it difficult to read in places.