All Comments on 'Mom and Son Afternoon Swim'

Apart from a few minor errors , your tale was very credible and enjoyable . So realistic that it was like being at a good movie . Is there more ?

Not many stories are this raw and satisfying to read. Bring on more like this, or a continuation if warranted/wanted. =)

I hope this is the first of many chapters.

Very very good,just who seduced who?more chapters please.

I'm a big fan of this genre, and this could have been one of the good stories, but you lost me when you switched from past tense (telling a story of what plausibly happened) to present tense (telling a fantasy of what you'd like to happen). To me, reading your sexual history (whether fact or fiction) is far more interesting than reading your fantasies. Pieater

Very hot! Clear up the tense and sober mom up and it will be perfect. Pleas do additonal chapters.

That was hot! I love her having loads of pubic hair. It's more realistic. And, to both of them, the shock of doing it was very real.

he comes "home" after a year at university but doesn't live at home?

they go to the pool to swim but it is not where they live.

mom is a drunk but it doesn't bother the son?

what a cluster f%$k

I had fucked my mother several times at night in bed.

i am 13 years old

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhabited sex

This story is a complete turn-on. Very real.