All Comments on 'Mom Fulfills Son's Desires Ch. 05'

a really good story with a good ending

Sick.

This is by far thee most greatest sex story I have ever read. I came on every sex scene the first time I read it. It was great. Please make more! I need to see what happens next!!!

that it's finished!!! Please write more, I came pretty much every chapter and only once because it was short.

Excellent story telling, excellent idea, excellent slut!! Go on and write some more, and make it longer if possible please...

I need at least one more chapter! plsssssssssssssssssssss!!!! I absolutely loved your story,the sad part is having to come back to reality after having read it :(

No threesome have Jill shave her pussy. Get rid of the dad. Write more longer much longer chapters.

AMAZING!FABULOUS!Well written story.I had an hard on since the 1st chapter to the last one.Keep on writing on this mom/son exciting story.

This is absolutely one of the best stories I have ever read. My cock is hard and I cannot wait for my wife to appear with her mom. I may fuck both of them I am so hard and my mind is so fucked up with sex. I think that a 3-way with Cindy is a good idea.

Loved the whole reaching for the cereal thing - think I could become a morning person after all!!!;o))

maybe add a threesome with cindy

i felt every orgasm that they had......please keep on writing

One of the best stories in the incest/taboo genre. Would be truly grateful if you added more. Please change nothing about your style and maintain the character's true personalities throughout, as you have done already.

Just love this series because of the nature in the relationship, and also how the 2 leads interact, back and forth, along with descriptive action. Would love to see this series extended.

wish i had grown up with a mother like that,,,i was thoroughly engrossed in every word of this story,,,picturing it all in my minds eye,,,how truly erotic!! very satisfying,,want more like this please!

Waiting for number 6. Jill made me cum to good to be true.

Caught the imagination straight away was standing proud nearly all through

great story and wish it had not ended.

My goodness what a beautifully sexy story, I loved it and I even ended picturing myself in Jill's place with a horny son. it was an enjoyable read and made me so beautifully wet, thank you.

Kim, From UK

ktslips@yahoo.co.uk

Love the story, had me dripping the whole time. Where is chapter6,7,8,9?

I LOVED your writing. I miss my Mom and sure wish we could have done all this before she passed away..... Came very close but she was worried about getting pregnant.

This story and Mom takes a Ride are all-time erotic classics, wonderfull stuff!

You are one sick motherf*cker, and I mean that as a complement. I Know that I'm five years and several comments late but where's chapter 6?

Going by the comments made, everyone loved the story. It was beautiful. Why didn't you include the 'completion' so we could share in and enjoy their fulfillment?

oooh! One can feel Jill's ass getting oiled, rubbed & finally, fucked! Wonderful story

Dear Nakdsalr,

WoW! What a lovely story - how well told! I could actually see n feel Jill's ass!

Keep writing!

Suzy

That was an awesome series. Here's hoping his mother allows him to fuck Carrie and Cindy

Great series! Only wish I have, is that you had continued it.

This is a favorite fantasy of mine, and you hit every single point of what's in my head! LOVED the detail description, the reluctance at first and then giving in to wild sexual depravity. 5 stars for sure...I'm dehydrated now!

very well written story i can relate to the story

and really enjoyed reading it - well done - hope you have other stories to offer us?

love your story wish there were more moves out there to see like that i have jack off at least 4 time read your story

This story must be the greatest incest story on here i felt the greatest feeling of guilty pleasure reading this. PLEASE MAKE MORE!

you know what ? Jim shoud fuck Cindy too that s unfair he must fuck her!! and u r great ok? that s the best erotic story i v ever read keep writing !!!!!

Only found you yesterday read everything you've written in 2 sittings. Well written, great characters, good story line just a great piece of writing well done. You got to get Cindy in on the act i'm thinking mom catches Tim and Cindy up to no good an rapes both of them ? Well i got to go i've leaked about a quart of precum in my boxers needs a shower. lol Again great read thankyou. I'll be looking for you sequel. regards Puremagic.

I made me so hard I think I need to join in and I could fuck that pussy wile he fucks your ass mommy

Keep going, I'd like to read about him, his mom and her friends!

One of the hottest mother/son incest series on this site. I hope (not much since it's been so long) we get more chapters one day...

This series was hott!!! I agree with other posters, we need to either see mom become his slut, or action including the aforemention aunt or best freind Carrie. I enjoyed this emensly.

ONE OF THE HOTTEST AND SEXUALLY STIMULATING. THE WRITER IS OUTSTANDING IN HIS WRITING AT BEING ABLE TO GET ME HOT THROUGHOUT THE WHOLE STORY. I WANT TO READ MORE OF HIS STORIES, SINCE I SEE HE HASN'T WRITTEN ANY MORE SINCE 05.

this is making my pussy throb like hell, i wish someone like tim would fuck ME right now.

Cannot count number of times I masturbated to this story. all the different facets of storyline are hot.

This is a moving and sensually written piece. It is also very believable. I kept your interest and always gave more.

What a wonderful series! Please continue with more chapters.

love the build up to the anal sex...mother reluctance..son humping her ass every chance he got..finally taking her ass which is the best part of incest sex.

I don't want to see Mom pregnant, Tim needs a little Cindy and her daughter. Maybe one of his Annt's.

Thank you for Writing Them..

that is the best story i have ever read please continue let them get pregnant it is possible tied tubs have failed it would be so hot and cindy could get preg too please

Well I have to say this is one of the best stories I have read yet! Im hoping there is more to this story. It would be great to have mom become his personal slut, begging for his cock to fill her asshole every day and drinking his cum daily! Then she can set up her freinds to fuck him and become both of there cumslut slaves. Mom and son using them to seduce her husband and blackmail him into supporting them. But with him as well being under mom and sons control and then the son gets to sleep with mom all the time and dad is a cuckold to son and mom, at which point if you wanted they could make dad a gay cocksucking slave

What a wonderful series! I was hard and wet many times. Your writing is very good. Please continue with more chapters. Another chapter to " Mom Takes A Ride " would be great also! Thanks for the stories. RAY.

uhhnnn wow that made me so wet.

mmmmm uhhh god

You have done a wonderful job of bringing Jill and Tim along to this point. Their relationship would be tested by a pregnancy....please!

Sad that it seems you have finished this super tale. I'm sure such good writing takes a lot of valuable time, but just read through the comments your stories have attracted and know that you have a very appreciative and loyal audience waiting with bated breath for your next chapter - Please? Thanks again for a terrific story.

and writers that can't write,want to write all the time.you write with the best of the writers on this site,why not write more.

HE MUST IMPREGNATE HER!!!!!

please follow this up. i love this series you have started and cant wait for CH. 6.

keep up the good work

your stories all can have more chapters the way you write them which is good.the son with carrie and cindy should be explored.make them his private sluts.

Loved this story. Hope that you continue this one, as well as your "Mom Takes a Ride" story! Thanks!

Wow that was very good and keep up more ch. 06 thanks cfh

starting off with a great ch 5 will there be a ch 6 I hope so

All your stories were told exquistely. You just have the talent.

you left us hanging so long,please don't forget your fans this long again.great story keep it up(smile).

Loved it from start to finish.