by Chrestomathist
Mmmm I enjoyed the experience of reading this story, infact it made me search out the author and investigate other works. This story is by far my favorite of this author. It jumps in the experience with both feet not wasting anytime. Often when authors do that it feels very fake and unrealistic but I bought in right way and enjoyed the whole ride. It may be different for other readers but for me it was the perfect blend of dialogue and story progression I appreciate. After reading I seriously contemplated summoning the courage to place an add on Craig's list myself for a roleplay experience. I lacked the daring heart hence relegated to reading of those who do. Good luck author in your literary endeavors.
This story is so hot, I'm so hard I want to cum....love it love it...gottta cum!
Because I am a man,but this is so hottttt,In fact I know what it smells like two women on heat a gilfriend said the following."do you want to fuck me while I make love to my girl friend?"
eventhough i'm a man my pre cum has left a wet spot on my pants from being entertained by 4 very hot and loving women i felt like i was there watching, excellent.
Normally this genre would bother me, or at least the mother/daughter thing would, but you wrote this so well that even I like it. You are a great writer, keep on writing.
way too long
keep it short and sweet
i was starting to jack off
but you bored me so much that i had to stop
...
BEFORE CUMING!
wow, what a turn on. my wife gets very hot when i murmur fantasy talk about her mum in her ear. and also her step-dad. i know she wants them both, and wants me to have them both as well as her. she gets wetter the more i whisper that she's staring at her mums breasts or watching her dads bulge in his pants
I write here on LIT and have for some time. Don't ever let the readers tell you how to write or in what style - write what is comfortable for YOU and you can only improve. Good luck.
I exclusively read incestuous stories here, and this has to be in my top 3, if not my favorite. Every element of the story was displayed flawlessly. I had to skip the events between Tanya and Rachel's first encounter and Rachel arriving at Tanya's house because I needed to cum quickly, but everything I did read was wonderful. I really felt the love in the foursome, and enjoyed how everyone had sex with everyone. I also liked how the characters came from such little things, like Tanya cumming when Rachel told her she wanted to fuck her with a strap-on. I found this story by searching for anal mother-daughter stories, so I would have liked some more anal in the story. In fact, non-anal porn/stories have become rather unexciting for me, but this is a total exception. I'd love to read a sequal~
When I first came across this author, I though, "Wow! An apparent specialist in erotic stories featuring sex between mothers and daughters!" I really liked two pairs of mothers and daughter having a grand old orgasmic time. In the wanderings of my smutty imagination, I thought about the potential of a whole mother/daughter sex underground in an otherwise respectable community, with participants with prim and proper reputations. Except behind closed doors and drawn shades, where a daughter is cupping her mom's boobs in the kitchen or mom's head is between her daughter's legs on the living room sofa. And let's not get into the details of suburban neighborhood mother/daughter afternoon socials that culminate in sapphic incestuous orgies! But it seems none of this will come about as the author has been silent now for three years and has probably moved on.
This is unquestionably one of the most well-written stories ever posted on Literotica. Your literary talents are obvious and noteworthy, and I certainly hope you are using those talents in some way to bring you happiness, if not income, as well. <BR><BR>I salute your excellence!
If a woman tricked me into that sorta shit.... I would have cleaned her clock and then my mother would have gotten the same thing.
that was the best story ever. i did the same thing with my mom and aunt
l thought that that story was the most horrible thing i have ever read there was no details at all about the charachters so get a fucking life
i love it every sec of it, thank you so much, you should keep writing dear, take care
it was pretty good i like they were happy i wish i di things to my mom o well
i love mother daughter stories. i'm not lesbian but there is something i find hot about my mum
I would so much like to make love to my daughter like that...she so much turns me on and makes Mommys pussy cream
MMmmmmmmmmmmm very very hot....got very wet.....looking forward to more stories....mmmmmmmmmmmm
i was fortunate to have a very liberal mom. She did, we did, many many things separately and together. I am who I am because of her.''
Wish I could find someone like that here.
loved it so much.me and my cousin have done things very similar to this and it is great.one of the best i've ever read
whoa, nice story, really, really enjoyed it,,1st mother,daughter story i have read,,hope there are many more here,,,
after radin g this story in the morning I devised a plan and seduced my mom that night. I have never came so hard then when I got my mom between my legs and licking my pussy
So Hott! I was so wet by the end! My cousin was over and we have done it before. I made her eat my wet pussy and I never came so hard in my life! I wish I could have with my hot mom!
I have been wanting to fuck my mom fora long time. In the middle of reading this,i had to go masturbate! Mmmmmm
I'm a lesbian & I'm tired of reading daddy daughter sex, & this is by far the BEST incest story I've ever read. It showed the love & I enjoyed reading it. It wasn't too long at all. Of course I'm not a guy trying to get off real fast, so I was able to read the whole thing. Amazing work. Id love to read more! :) definately try getting somethin out of your talent. You'll go far.
Rachel's emotions came through so strongly that I bet nary a reader finished the story without being at least a little wet.
I get so wet when I read this story and wish I could find a mommy to make me lick her pussy while she straddles my face. This story is so hot that I don't have to touch my pussy even once to cum. Playing with my nipples makes me cum harder than anything. I want to eat a mommy pussy so badly that I would probably cum just from doing it. I never knew I could get this wet until I read this story. It turns me on more than any other lesbian incest story and I love the dirty talk using the word mommy. I think this type of role play would drive me into a frenzy of lust.Thank you!
I can not count how many times I've read this story.
Love your choice of descriptive words. I've never read anyone better at it!
This is the first truly outstanding mother/daughter story that I've read. Beautifully descriptive.
I read with my fingers in my ass, and rubbing my clit with many exciting orgasms.
Oh my god that story was so well written and so very very hot, my panties are so wet. Thanks xxoo
For me that was a two-orgasm story! Thank you
Sarah (lover to my lesbian daughter)