by gentleman_bill
You have her at 18 year but you make her with mind of a 6-10 year old. Looking past that you said he given her baths for years so he been messing with her in one way or the other all her life and the mom is no better.
dad having a go at her is all well and good but if i were her i wouldn't want to be sharing my dad's cock with my mother at the same time. daddy would have to make a choice.....old or new pussy.
She's turning eighteen, but she has the mental capacity of an EIGHT year old? Either she's retarded, or the author is.
Juvenial, silly, no plot, stupid people. But I'm not stupid enough to even finish the thing. As stated in other comments, this girl should be in special olympics not in here insulting my intelligence. she's 18 & understands, what a cock is, & a pussy, but doesn't understand what fucking is?? Dialog is childish, come to think of it the whole story is childish.
I can't imagine any 18 year old in a public school setting still calling her parents Mommy and Daddy and being so naive. Now if she was home schooled and had no friends who dated and talked, maybe that'd be a different story. And mom's only 34? Daughter 18? Looks like Mommy learned at a much younger age than Candy....
So unbelievable as to be unreadable. Sorry. Real humans don't talk this way or behave this way.
I wish my mommy would open my cunt for my daddy to suck and fuck every morning and every night. My fantasy is for mommy to suck me while daddy fucks me.
What? Are they all dumb blondes?????? Didn't even get 1/2 way, the dialogue is just to stupid.