All Comments on 'Mom's Empty Bed'

I only wish that there would have been more sexual encounters revealed in the story.

I always like to read as to what happened the next morning and how they handled their incestuous tryst.

Thanks for the read.

my mother's husband = father or stepfather. Get a better translator program. GARBAGE

You start off by saying that this story happened a few days ago and then end by saying that before too many weeks had passed his mother asked her husband to leave. Which is it? Did this happen a few days or a few weeks ago?

Please edit your work carefully. For a short story you should not have such a glaring inconsistency.

They have more courage to say the things they do if they don't say who they are. I understand that my mother's husband is a less personal way to say father or stepfather. Some son's don't recognise these husbands as fathers. I liked the story and would like to read more from this author.

Starts off nice, but you lost me when the mom started saying stuff like "do you think mommy is pretty" & "mommies aren't supposed to lust after their boys"

I love getting reader feedback because it can only make me a better writer. I especially appreciate the comments about describing the following encounters and my time-shift error (oops!) Sometimes stream of consciousness writing needs more close editing. I did use the "mother's husband" phrase intentionally to show the distance and lack of respect between the spouse and kid. Many stories in this genre start out with a absent father figure. This was my way of putting emotional distance between the two.

Literorica is a site for writers of various talents. I found the recent criticisms to be minor, but imparted as though they were serious and the story of unworthy of being read. Please refer the rest of us to your works please.

I enjoyed the story, minor flaws and all. Nobody loves you like mom...

Please continue writing. Absorb the good criticism, blow off the rest.

my mum is just like that, ill. put my story in one day the only difference is that my story is true

Hi !!!! Is there a Chapter 2 forthcoming? I think you have the setting, and the characters, add a little spice, it might be nice !!!

Thanks Don

Well paced, no spelling or grammar errors, really good job!

I'm sorry, but the commenter who objected to the son in this excellent story referring to himself as his mother's new husband is sadly mistaken. Take the title to this fine tale, Mom's Empty Bed. Well, it WAS empty, but now mom's big strapping boy is filling it, just as he's filling his mother's cunt with his big stiff prick. Isn't that what a husband does to his wife's empty twat? And filling her twat full of the creamy sperm from his loaded balls, again and again? Now that's her young son's job, and her boy is really UP for it!

would have been better with more background instead a diving right into the sex.

please write part 2

My parents were divorced, and had been for about 6 months to a year. I was 15, and my mom was in bed in the room next to me. Many times over the years I had heard her and my step-dad having sex at night, and heard her having orgasm as I jerked off in bed or humped the mattress until I came! This particular night, I could hear her rustling around on her bed and I was a bit restless as well, moving back and forth on my bed. Before I knew it, she appeared at my door and asked me if I was having a hard time sleeping. I said yes and she came in and layed on my bed under the covers beside me. She started asking me about if I had any new girlfriends and if I had ever done anything with them. I said that I had done some stuff, and she began to rub her fingers across my body asking me questions. She touched my nipples and asked if I had ever touched a girl like she was touching me. I said only a little and she took my hand and placed it on her breasts. I got so hard!!! She told me that I could rub hers and she actually moved my hands and fingers around on her breasts and nipples. She then moved her hand and fingers down my chests to my underware and slid her fingers into my underware brushing against the head of my cock. She then asked me if I had ever touched a girl down there which I said no. She then proceeded to rub my cock and with her free hand placed my hand inside her panties pushing my fingers into her pussy. She moved and pushed my fingers against her clit making me rub her clit nice and hard. Within a few moments, she and I were both cumming!! From that night on, we began to enjoy each other for several years to come. I always considered myself lucky, and to be honest, miss those days! I was sure a lucky kid!!!

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Pretty well written. Though a short story about the beautiful joining of a loving mother and son can be enjoyable, this one is too short to adequately explain the rapid change from mother and son to family lovers. A little more background, showing why it eventually led to passionate sex, would have added color and believability to their special union. I'm a big fan of loving mother and son sex stories. Though the story leaves me wishing for more detail, I do appreciate the author's attempt to address the subject.

Also, would have been nice to know if she found the panties you came in.

For a short story, this is a very good story. Author used good English. No gutter slang. I like complex plots. I Like character development. I like to understand the psychological processes od the characters. This story is a missed opportunity for the author.