All Comments on 'Mom's 'Joy Boy''

but wandered around with too much extraneous plot, and when it finally got to the sex, it needed much more description and real build-up.

Yes it could have been more descriptive but it was very well

thought out and written the way we like them...

This was a delightful read, with subtle humor that I'd not noticed in other stories in E. Grigor's offerings. It's a good story line with controlled conflict and interesting characters.

A 'Toy Boy' or as you say a "Joy Boy" is an amazing excitement in ones life. yummyyyyy!

I got a great laugh out of parts of this

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