All Comments on 'Mom's Roommate & More'

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Mercy you definitely need to add to this GREAT story

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There really needs to be a part 3. Maybe Garrett actually knocking up Mom and Aunt. Then maybe Garrett banging Grandma. Heck Doug said he had wanted to fuck his Mom when he was younger. So have Doug's Mom visit and Doug catches Garrett fucking Doug's Mom. When Doug admits he had always wanted too have sex with her. So why Garrett and not him. She can tell him cause Garrett had to balls to go for it and Doug never did.

Looking to the future Kristen becoming pregnant with a new son and causing a new stir once he becomes old enough.

Story line is pretty good. But you need an editor to correct the mistakes and do some formatting to the story. You switch back and forth between characters and places without an indication of change.

Anony Mous

I really love sneaky sex themed porn, its gets me going.... Loved your work...

Great read, like it 5 str, not a writer, but I can see one more last chapter, now that dad likes what he sees and hears!!!!

I didn't like it. I don't like the stories in which the husbands end up enjoying being cuckolded.

What a horrible ending to this story. No conclusion at all. Did the mom get pregnant with Garrett or did she start fucking her husband again. All sorts of things unanswered.

This needs a 3 and maybe even a 4 or 5 additions to it. Mom needs to get knocked up and maybe even Aunt. Dad needs to be straight up cuckolded or maybe Mom just leave him for the Son. Maybe Grandma needs to spread her legs for Garrett as well.

I agree. There should be a part 3. The story didn't resolve as well as it could have. It's still one of my favorites, though.

Loved it needed more chapters though

I loved the wicked cheating mommy and auntie. Please write more. I need more of their teasing and daring acts.

I think way too many people don't realize the author moved to a paid subscribe star page. They're not giving you free content anymore.

Great story! Needs more chapters! What happens with Heather? Does Gramma get into his harem? Does Kristen go back to try to work it out with Doug by cuckolding him using Garrett as her 'Bull'? Lots of possibilities. Keep this going....please!

Damn this is no way to end a story like this!! I was so waiting to hear about continuing the "around the universe when it got to the ass fucking". A good story for sure ,but a disappointment when it just stopped and left you hanging " no pun intended".

I agree with the other commenters.. Definitely, need more chapters, cause you know the Grandma wants a turn & also it be nice to know if he knocks up his Mom or Aunt, too.. Does suck to leave a story on a cliffhanger like that.. Hope more chapters more some day or at least know why they're arent...

This needs more chapters! Mother in law needs to take charge and get doug in chastity!

Y'all who're rating this higher because the poor bastard father/husband Doug gets a bone thrown to him in this entry, and it looks like the mother son kink is going to become part of his and his wife's sex life...no.

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A mate of mine made the mistake of paying for the subscription thing mentioned in the bio, and they were so disgusted by what happens in the "mom's roommate forever" sequel that they let me peek so I could share the revulsion.

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Doug's mother and family help Kristen and Garrett humiliate Doug even worse, and help Kristen and Garrett fool "pathetic" war veteran Doug into thinking that he impregnated Kristen when he got briefly hard from being tormented with stories, "fictional" stories, about Garrett cuckolding him, and Kristen briefly, reluctantly, with great disgust, let him inside her. Then Kristen, Garrett, and Doug's family conspire to get Doug to buy a bigger house, so he and Kristen can hypothetically sleep together again in a normal bed, but Kristen tells him he's going to live in the spacious basement apartment, alone, forever, and Garrett is going to keep sharing her bed. "It's best for everyone" Kristen tells him. And Doug is still supposed to believe Kristen isn't fucking Garrett, really, but that they faked it "for his sake" to get him hard.

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Yep. It's as depressing and sickening as it sounds. Of course my mate canceled his sub, but I thought more people should know that this story is sicker than you thought. Actually, iirc, "Mom's roommate forever" was posted here once, but was scored so miserably that klrxo took it down. Shame it wasn't just erased from existence, but apparently some sick fucks get off from reading about war heroes getting cuckolded and humiliated by their entire family.

Whole new meaning to "westpac widow"

Terrible

People rating this so high cause they have no respect for those who serve or served in the military they all should be ashamed of themselves and banned from the site just like the writer of this trash story

What kind of a scumbag would write this kind of thing? You'd have to have a pretty bent mind to wanted to demean somebody like this, and the writers trying to justify it somehow with this story and encourage people to be unfaithful to somebody who really deserves a faithful spouse. Story-wise, throw the stupid wife in jail where she belongs, divorce her, and when she gets out hopefully she (and the sister-in-law) has some really bad accidents. No retribution, no justice. No justice, no peace.

Kristen was evil and mean.she was mind gucking her husband with her son. I liked the story some what but as it kept going. I got turned off

Have to agree with most of the other comments about this story. Way to long, way to mom and aunt being sluts. What was next? Is dad going to screw the little sister as he can get up watching the videos of his wife and sister? And the way that they treat the veteran because he cam barely function is just wrong. Wife and son would be thrown out of the house in the real world. Sorry you only get a one star today

You should consider continuing this series. Garrett could seduce and then fuck his grandmom, Deloris, would make for more family loving.

Please continue. Mom and Son getting Dad hard. Mom and Dad finally fucking. Son and Grandma getting it on.

I don't know why I did it not after reading the first 2 parts but I finally read the last part and it was sicking to read it was a true horror to see what they did and do to the war vet Doug in the story and truly one of worst cuckold story I have read ever fantasy only means that the writer actually thinks about doing that which says in regards to these stories and chapters the writer thinks about it and that it will be funny to cuckold a war vet someone who deserves our respect if nothing else

This writer does has some good stories but the mom's roommate series does not meet that

I really wish you would continue this one.

Wish there was more. What about Doug's mom?

There really needs to be at least one more chapter to this tale. I'm looking forward to reading more of the story, heck, if you need a proofreader I can certainly help with that!

The real story would be his revenge on the narcissistic so-called 'wife' - it really begs for somebody to write that part of it. Needs to be some serious retribution there to have any justice.

Chapter 3 Doug works hard on his rehab without anybody a wiser while the others are frolicking around. Doug secretly goes after that Heather girl then maybe a next chapter of both Gmas of husband and wife call a family meeting to straighten out the growing animosity between everyone then they frak happily ever after lmmfao

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The first 500 words of this is actually the hottest thing on Literotica

We need a new chapter to this story! This is so wrong but oh so good!

Garrett is a traitor. And the mother is disgusting filth. Ick. This isn't like the husband is cheating, or is an alcoholic or abusive or lost all sexual interest in his wife. He wss the victim of a terrible accident while serving his country. I hope Doug finds out and cuts them both out of his life. They deserve nothing.

Definitely need a part 3!! Maybe if we're lucky, Kristen and Doug seperate. And them Garrett and Kristen expect a child together

Doug should fuck his mother if she's still alive or his mother in law or maybe his sister , The mom and son should move out ,the baby sister should stay with dad , but the son and mom should not be rubbing it in his face .

Good story, too bad it’s unfinished though.

This story has still got legs, what happened after the day at the beach, did he share Misty while Kristen spent odd times with Doug, did Grandma get to taste her grandsons fruit too there is still lots to tell, I hope you do because I think it’s very erotic

Ok. I love a good mom story. But I can’t get over the fact, about how shitty they treated the husband. He did his duty, and paid for everything in their lives. And his reward is, to be cast aside like a pile of crap. And NO WAY the husband agrees to allowing wifey to sleep with her son. And the fact that his sister in law, and mother in law are in on it, makes it even worse. I picture an ending where, he has them all sold to a Mexican Whorehouse, including his son. The husband undergoes experimental surgery, and gets back his ability to have an erection. Happy ending!

The mother is a turd, the son is a turd,fuck em

What an amazing and hot story i didnt want it to end

Wow, that was stupid.

Good story should have it continued with the daughter and the farther get together

Could have been better. The concept was good, but did not like the treatment of the dad. could have developed the relationship between Misty and Mom more as well as the three of them,

P.S. Too much talk about their FEET.