All Comments on 'Mom's Roommate & More'

Could have been better. The concept was good, but did not like the treatment of the dad. could have developed the relationship between Misty and Mom more as well as the three of them,

P.S. Too much talk about their FEET.

Good story should have it continued with the daughter and the farther get together

Wow, that was stupid.

What an amazing and hot story i didnt want it to end

The mother is a turd, the son is a turd,fuck em

Ok. I love a good mom story. But I can’t get over the fact, about how shitty they treated the husband. He did his duty, and paid for everything in their lives. And his reward is, to be cast aside like a pile of crap. And NO WAY the husband agrees to allowing wifey to sleep with her son. And the fact that his sister in law, and mother in law are in on it, makes it even worse. I picture an ending where, he has them all sold to a Mexican Whorehouse, including his son. The husband undergoes experimental surgery, and gets back his ability to have an erection. Happy ending!

This story has still got legs, what happened after the day at the beach, did he share Misty while Kristen spent odd times with Doug, did Grandma get to taste her grandsons fruit too there is still lots to tell, I hope you do because I think it’s very erotic

Good story, too bad it’s unfinished though.

Doug should fuck his mother if she's still alive or his mother in law or maybe his sister , The mom and son should move out ,the baby sister should stay with dad , but the son and mom should not be rubbing it in his face .

Definitely need a part 3!! Maybe if we're lucky, Kristen and Doug seperate. And them Garrett and Kristen expect a child together

Garrett is a traitor. And the mother is disgusting filth. Ick. This isn't like the husband is cheating, or is an alcoholic or abusive or lost all sexual interest in his wife. He wss the victim of a terrible accident while serving his country. I hope Doug finds out and cuts them both out of his life. They deserve nothing.

We need a new chapter to this story! This is so wrong but oh so good!

The first 500 words of this is actually the hottest thing on Literotica

Chapter 3 Doug works hard on his rehab without anybody a wiser while the others are frolicking around. Doug secretly goes after that Heather girl then maybe a next chapter of both Gmas of husband and wife call a family meeting to straighten out the growing animosity between everyone then they frak happily ever after lmmfao

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The real story would be his revenge on the narcissistic so-called 'wife' - it really begs for somebody to write that part of it. Needs to be some serious retribution there to have any justice.

There really needs to be at least one more chapter to this tale. I'm looking forward to reading more of the story, heck, if you need a proofreader I can certainly help with that!

Wish there was more. What about Doug's mom?

I really wish you would continue this one.

This writer does has some good stories but the mom's roommate series does not meet that

I don't know why I did it not after reading the first 2 parts but I finally read the last part and it was sicking to read it was a true horror to see what they did and do to the war vet Doug in the story and truly one of worst cuckold story I have read ever fantasy only means that the writer actually thinks about doing that which says in regards to these stories and chapters the writer thinks about it and that it will be funny to cuckold a war vet someone who deserves our respect if nothing else

Please continue. Mom and Son getting Dad hard. Mom and Dad finally fucking. Son and Grandma getting it on.

You should consider continuing this series. Garrett could seduce and then fuck his grandmom, Deloris, would make for more family loving.

Have to agree with most of the other comments about this story. Way to long, way to mom and aunt being sluts. What was next? Is dad going to screw the little sister as he can get up watching the videos of his wife and sister? And the way that they treat the veteran because he cam barely function is just wrong. Wife and son would be thrown out of the house in the real world. Sorry you only get a one star today

Kristen was evil and mean.she was mind gucking her husband with her son. I liked the story some what but as it kept going. I got turned off

What kind of a scumbag would write this kind of thing? You'd have to have a pretty bent mind to wanted to demean somebody like this, and the writers trying to justify it somehow with this story and encourage people to be unfaithful to somebody who really deserves a faithful spouse. Story-wise, throw the stupid wife in jail where she belongs, divorce her, and when she gets out hopefully she (and the sister-in-law) has some really bad accidents. No retribution, no justice. No justice, no peace.

People rating this so high cause they have no respect for those who serve or served in the military they all should be ashamed of themselves and banned from the site just like the writer of this trash story

Terrible

Whole new meaning to "westpac widow"

Y'all who're rating this higher because the poor bastard father/husband Doug gets a bone thrown to him in this entry, and it looks like the mother son kink is going to become part of his and his wife's sex life...no.

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A mate of mine made the mistake of paying for the subscription thing mentioned in the bio, and they were so disgusted by what happens in the "mom's roommate forever" sequel that they let me peek so I could share the revulsion.

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Doug's mother and family help Kristen and Garrett humiliate Doug even worse, and help Kristen and Garrett fool "pathetic" war veteran Doug into thinking that he impregnated Kristen when he got briefly hard from being tormented with stories, "fictional" stories, about Garrett cuckolding him, and Kristen briefly, reluctantly, with great disgust, let him inside her. Then Kristen, Garrett, and Doug's family conspire to get Doug to buy a bigger house, so he and Kristen can hypothetically sleep together again in a normal bed, but Kristen tells him he's going to live in the spacious basement apartment, alone, forever, and Garrett is going to keep sharing her bed. "It's best for everyone" Kristen tells him. And Doug is still supposed to believe Kristen isn't fucking Garrett, really, but that they faked it "for his sake" to get him hard.

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Yep. It's as depressing and sickening as it sounds. Of course my mate canceled his sub, but I thought more people should know that this story is sicker than you thought. Actually, iirc, "Mom's roommate forever" was posted here once, but was scored so miserably that klrxo took it down. Shame it wasn't just erased from existence, but apparently some sick fucks get off from reading about war heroes getting cuckolded and humiliated by their entire family.

This needs more chapters! Mother in law needs to take charge and get doug in chastity!

I agree with the other commenters.. Definitely, need more chapters, cause you know the Grandma wants a turn & also it be nice to know if he knocks up his Mom or Aunt, too.. Does suck to leave a story on a cliffhanger like that.. Hope more chapters more some day or at least know why they're arent...

Damn this is no way to end a story like this!! I was so waiting to hear about continuing the "around the universe when it got to the ass fucking". A good story for sure ,but a disappointment when it just stopped and left you hanging " no pun intended".

Great story! Needs more chapters! What happens with Heather? Does Gramma get into his harem? Does Kristen go back to try to work it out with Doug by cuckolding him using Garrett as her 'Bull'? Lots of possibilities. Keep this going....please!

I think way too many people don't realize the author moved to a paid subscribe star page. They're not giving you free content anymore.

I loved the wicked cheating mommy and auntie. Please write more. I need more of their teasing and daring acts.

Loved it needed more chapters though

I agree. There should be a part 3. The story didn't resolve as well as it could have. It's still one of my favorites, though.

This needs a 3 and maybe even a 4 or 5 additions to it. Mom needs to get knocked up and maybe even Aunt. Dad needs to be straight up cuckolded or maybe Mom just leave him for the Son. Maybe Grandma needs to spread her legs for Garrett as well.

What a horrible ending to this story. No conclusion at all. Did the mom get pregnant with Garrett or did she start fucking her husband again. All sorts of things unanswered.

I didn't like it. I don't like the stories in which the husbands end up enjoying being cuckolded.

Great read, like it 5 str, not a writer, but I can see one more last chapter, now that dad likes what he sees and hears!!!!

I really love sneaky sex themed porn, its gets me going.... Loved your work...

Story line is pretty good. But you need an editor to correct the mistakes and do some formatting to the story. You switch back and forth between characters and places without an indication of change.

Anony Mous

Looking to the future Kristen becoming pregnant with a new son and causing a new stir once he becomes old enough.

There really needs to be a part 3. Maybe Garrett actually knocking up Mom and Aunt. Then maybe Garrett banging Grandma. Heck Doug said he had wanted to fuck his Mom when he was younger. So have Doug's Mom visit and Doug catches Garrett fucking Doug's Mom. When Doug admits he had always wanted too have sex with her. So why Garrett and not him. She can tell him cause Garrett had to balls to go for it and Doug never did.

More

Mercy you definitely need to add to this GREAT story

Moar?

This story has blown my mind, more than once. Please do more! It's really really good

Generally, I’m not into stories this long, but this has been a BOMB story that’s been well worth it. Smokin’ hot from start to finish. Kinda waiting for Grandma to get “interested”. REALLY hoping you have plans on continuing this.

I thank you for a good story. Keep up the great work. How about adding to this story with the Heather (?) and grandma in the mix. And have dad watching, getting HARD and joining in fucking all the females, etc. Girl on girl and threesomes.

Great!!!! Needs at least a 3rd chapter. Maybe Mom and Aunt both getting pregnant with Garret's children. Maybe Grandma joining in and riding Garret as well. Garret and Kristen being caught fucking by Doug but not caring at all. Maybe even humiliating him after all that is sort of what Grandma has been doing to Doug. Is that cruel to do that to Doug? HELL YES but the thoughts of Garret fucking Kristen seem to be the only thing that excites Doug.

Good job, thanks for sharing your work.

EXCELLENT.

Are we awaiting a third chapter? there are a number of obvious plotlines to follow both his mother and his aunt have stated that they are not using active birth control measures, Heather wishes to be serviced and dad has had a functioning erection for the first time since his accident.

A good proofreader/editor is needed as there are a number of obvious errors with spellings and synonyms, along with grammatical mistakes throughout this piece.

it was a real good story before the aunt was written in to it. kind of ruined the whole story after that. but still a good read.

What a cruel and self absorbed person this Kristen is. Also, the sex acts are repetetive, one dimensional, to much tell and to little show, as with so many other stories on the site. I'm giving it two stars.

I wanted to read how he knocked both his mother and aunt up

I was also expecting his grandmother to become involved then fucking then all unconscious and last I want to read how he milked them and reimpregnanted them again otherwise a great story more detail of his spearmint working into there womb and filling his seed

This author could really benefit from a editor, her imagination is sexy and perhaps slutty, but there are so many word that are spelled wrong or just wrong words all together is just drags down the rating’s of her work.

Whole damn thing was awesome. It's nice to have a few stories from an author who writes kinky smut and isn't an effete jackass

why is she so cruel ??? “I know this is gonna sound cruel, but I wish your dad had never come home." like jesus

Couldn’t agree more with mrdata9770. The sex was not, the mom was not. She did nothing but wine about being the injured party. What a cunt. Had no sympathy for her whatsoever. Made reading the rest of the story difficult and a bit creepy.

I see that you wrote this in 2014. Do you not have any plans to continue/finish it?

You need to continue/Conclude this story please!!!

Tits as big as basketballs yet again

Too much fucking. The mom and son are fucking in every other sentence......come on. And the father is 5 feet away and he son is fucking hi wife and he as NO CLUE? Again, come on.

It would have been better had the father died in the war. Then mother and son develop a romance. Little by little they move forward to having sex. And lets make the son impregnate his mother. And since grand mother is a looker....lets get grandson and grandmother together.

(7/14/2021, second read)

I had given this narrative 5 stars my first read because IMO, it was well written with a message. In my earlier comment, I should have written "Anyone but a disabled veteran". That was my constructive criticism, my opinion. For those who consider service to one's country an occupation, I say, I do not. I consider service to one's country exactly that "a service" and not an occupation. It is my opinion. I hold veterans and especially disabled veterans in very high regard. I'm especially grateful to those of our greatest generation.

I thank all Veterans regardless of their ability for their service.

@everyready. I am in the same position (disable vet). I totally agree with you 1000%. Ppl who complain probably aren’t Vets and have no idea what we feel, experienced, seen or think. Yet, they use us to criticize the authors choice of occupations as if that makes a difference in how a PERSON/HUMAN BEING would feel. It really irritates me when non military ppl think they know what we feel. You are so right with regards to constructive criticism to improve the story. Yet, ppl in their own miserable existence choice to be malicious ANONYMOUSLY (most times) to be negative instead of moving on and reading something that appeal to their sensibilities. Which is just sad! Your post was so on point; regarding no further chapters. I can only imagine a writer (who post for free/working hard to develop a fluid story) to be criticized constantly because ppl can not/ choose not to differentiate between fantasy and reality. I’m so glad that you spoke out, because it’s really sad that someone would write a story, develop it with added humor which is hard and then post it for free and still be criticized because ppl can’t be mature enough to move on to another story. I’m happy you spoke up and out in support of the writer. 🙂 As well, I hope the writer does come back and write more chapters at some point. As one Vet to another—(don’t kn which branch) so…”Army Strong…”—“Forged by the Sea..”—“Aim High, Fly-Fight-Win…”—“Semper Fi”—“Born Ready”!!! Thank you for your service my “Comrade in Arms”!

To Writer: never stop you have a unique talent with your ability to combine sadness, trauma, humor, fun, with a realistic twist. Keep going never let detractors stop you from doing something you are really good at. 🥰

First thing.. I, as a seriously disabled vet with many of the same issues as the husband/father can honestly say this DOES NOT bother me. Sure the idea of something like this happening in the real world makes me cringe but it’s not real. It’s fiction. I’m sure stuff like this does happen but we’re not talking about the real world. Second, to the people who mentioned that rather than a veteran it should have been a construction worker etc. I say that’s ridiculous. Vets are no more important than anyone else and something like this happening to ANYONE would be terrible. Construction workers, dock workers etc etc all have feelings and all would be hurt. Occupation doesn’t change that. Third, reviews on here are supposed to be for constructive criticism to help the author improve and grow. If stuff like this bothers you then stop reading it. No one is compelling you to read it. Finally, I wish you would add more chapters klrxo. It feels incomplete as if you had intended to add more but maybe didn’t because people are being overly sensitive cry babies. I, as a disabled Veteran who is not bothered by this because I can differentiate between fantasy and the real world be grateful if you did add more chapters to this story.

I can't help but think that the author made Doug turned on by the stuff his wife was doing because the author realized that having his son, his wife, his sister, and his mother-in-law not only OK with the deceit but, in his MIL's case, even rubbing his nose in it made them reprehensible people...

Blaming your husband for getting hurt?

Lying to him...

Getting off on doing shit under his nose...

They're all trash... if you don't love your husband - which, no matter what she *says* she doesn't - leave him...

Let him at least have a chance of finding someone who cares about him.

Or, hey, if you're not ashamed of what you're doing, stop lying to him.

And I'd never talk to a sister if mine who deceived him like that.

Doug had any sense he'd hire a PI...

Hey, I'm not going to give this chapter a low rating but Anonymous below has a very good point. It would have been so much better for Doug to have been a dock worker, construction worker, lawyer, or anything other than a War Vet. But still, this story is so well done it deserves 5 stars, IMO.

Gave you a ONE for the shit treatment of a DISABLED VETERAN!!!!!!

Excellent

Thanks for this story. I love your stories, you really know how to put together great stories. This one needs a follow up, this mother is wild and smart and I would love to read more of her adventures.

Thanks for your recent feedback. 

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Happy reading!

Klrxo

I love your stories but I can definitely say that most women hate large cocks... My mother and I share a few sex stories of ours and her experiences say that big cocks are often painful... Also hung men don't always like foreplay thinking they can get the job done with just their cock... My point is don't have all your stories revolve around big dicked men... Most of the women I know would say they want a man within the average range so sex isn't a chore... Over all I like these longer stories and the shorter ones would be rated better by me if they were told in one piece rather than by all to short chapters

This is so misogynistic it makes me feel like a feminist. Sure, women are almost all bitches and cunts, but your brigade is next level. That mother in law needs a baseball bat to her fucking stupid mouth. Heather seemed nice, though.

A great follow up to the first story. Good to hear of the healing effect on the father. Again feet was mentioned but no followup. A bit disappointing for feet guys like me. 😔

needs more several sequels.?.

LOVED IT , MOM IS REALLY SNEAKY, KEEP IT UP PLEASE. HOPE TO SEE MORE CHAPTERS!!

THANK YOU

Part 3 should be called "Karma Baby".

This is where Garrett gets with Heather, falls for her, and comes to his senses,

Doug gets a miracle and all of his faculties back,

and the bitches get in a car wreck and are paralyzed from the neck down.

Doug divorces her and takes the daughter with him.

You left this open I wish there was more. I could mom and aunt getting pregnant (she did say she wanted more babies. I think you could even make dad ok with it all. Sorta cuckold type of thing without the mean spirit usually associated with that. I could even see grandma taking a turn too. Garrett could have his own harem and children. Your a great writer so, I'm sure you could do it and make it hot. Thank you for all your writings.

Your writing was great as always. I found kristen a despicable person, all of the women were pretty bad. I don't know if that was intended or not. I think it was the lying to her husband that really pushed it over. That and going from trying to seduce her son to trying to have sex wiyh her husband. It seemed like she didn't really care about either of them she jusg santed to cum.

Compared with "how mom made me state champ" where the mom most definately is focused on the son and while the sad is present, he is not really interested in her. That way the characters are just more likeable. And you can still have the danger of being caught.

oh, yea storyline skipping and all like I said in last part. aunt in love with nephew? kinda need to tell the whole story if you hint at it.

so grandma knowing it and all hints at an underlying story of incest running in the family or am I wrong here.

usually, you just don't just readily jump on the incest wagon and be okay with it without a backstory to it.

expecting the 3rd part with that heather girl and Garrett in university or something in that area.

also now dad got erection now... the mom could get pregnant and mask it by having sex with Doug.....

liked the story.

Please continue this story. Really effin hot. Thanks

The women in this family are selfish evil bitches. Grandma is the worst to me, she blatantly flaunting the fact that mom is in love with son. Mom is just as bad trying to get son as soon as daddy leaves. Then Dad's own sister having sex with her students and helping her sis-in-law to hide her affair. I feel sorry for Doug and Garrett. First Doug, a soldier defending his country, right or wrong he should be commended don't condemned. Then theirs Garrett, poor boy, is being manipulated as a way to punish the father and as a boy toy for his mom and aunt. That is not love and despite the author's efforts to portray it as love, to me it still comes across as vindictive manipulation of a teenager. Granted he is getting tons of sex and learning a lot but he is missing out on the chance of a real life and true love with someone like the Heather mentioned at the end. I see Garrett caught up in the middle and his life going to hell when it all comes crashing down around them all.

Now get Grandma, Heather, and Dad so the six of them can have more fun all together. WOW!

I've been told I overthink things. Perhaps this is another example, but I see two sides to the story: Doug's side and all the others. It's a very hot story if I put myself in Garrett's place, but from Doug's place, I get very pissed at the lack of respect, the blatant cheating, etc. The saddest thing is that Doug is blameless. Because Doug was able to improve his ability to get an erection (by seeing the cheating) doesn't make it any better. Seems like Kristen and Misty are evil. Garrett isn't innocent; he knows what he is doing. His hormones are partially to blame, though.

Ok, except for 200 refs to 'TANS'... Yuk !!!!!

Not everyone likes them! It's nice to still have a hint of 'paleness' on the breasts, rear & pussy, instead of having an all-over look of darkened dried out CowHide !!!!

Go to Google Images for..... Donatella Versace Nude

Geese, I'd rather have a WANK than fuck that if she was the last woman on Earth !

Great!!!

please continue his mom need to have his kid and Doug need to realize that his son is man of the house or have heather go out with the son

I enjoyed the story for the most part. Sorry, I do have a small complaint though. The story was (to me) kinda “hum-drum”! Only sucking and fucking, over and over again. I wrather expected more of your rendering. Only four stars this time.

Continue the story where Kristen gets pregnant by Garrett and so does Misty.Garett continues the love trist with mom and misty. Doug is getting better but still does not approve what the wife and son is doing. Keep going love reading the story. don't leave me hanging

This is a sad fucking story; Doug has no chance. His two closest confidants are in league against him. And, his wife can't lose; she gets her jollies either way. I wish both women would be in an auto accident together, turned into quads, and have Garrett get with Heather and flaunt his fucking her in their faces. And, then Garrett get permanent ed. This is just a cruel story, especially with the last vision he had of his wife prior to the accident. There is so much emotionalism attached to this story and demonstrates how bad being cuckolded is. One 🌟. BOOOOO.

This is fiction! Take your hurt feelings and stuff them in your asses. I'll bet every one of you blew at least one load while reading this then your guilt ferrets kicked in because "aw... poor hurt vet his wife is fucking somebody that got a stiffy while he couldnt..." ever hear of tough love you dick stroking morons. In the last part she got him over his mental block and now he's cumming like a man should. Not whining about what he lost. Read fiction for fiction, you want truth watch Dr. Phil. Fucking inbred shitholes that can't just read a story they have to make a fucking issue out of a poor fictional vet getting cuckolded. Get back on your meds then look up fiction vs non-fiction. I know you can read now work on comprehension.

GREAT STORY! Please finish off the arc. Now that poor dougy can sport a woody have him seduce Heather. After all... he's a hero who saved us from true evil. Phhft.

You really need a proofreader. Way too many grammatical errors.

This insulting story is disrespectful to the young men who defended your freedom by being tricked by a wealthy ruling class with corporate interests into an unprovoked war on the other side of the planet. If they hadn't done that, your freedom wouldn't even exist. You bet your ass that the greatest superpower in the history of the world would have been toppled by two third world nations that don't have running water or electricity in most of their homes. You'd probably be speaking Arab right now and learning the Muslim bible.

Shame on you for insulting our heroes; many of whom only served because they were misled by sensationalized propaganda, or came from a working class rural or inner city background, and had no viable career options other than joining the military.

These HEROES DIED, mostly by committing suicide. But the fraction of US soldiers who died in battle, did so invading foreign countries that had never launched an attack on US soil, and they did it to DEFEND YOUR FREEDOM. Maybe you should think about that fact next time you want to disrespect our armed forces.

It's good mate........but u gotta finish it.......bring in the dad for some more cuckold action yeah

I love good writing and that you are. I can only hope that you didn't write this for controversy. Reading some of the comments I can see many people don't care for Veterans.

You think that a wounded veteran or anyone at the VA would let that shit fly. There are a lot of veterans groups out there you forgot that won't let a brother or sister get treated so poorly. That's why I titled the comment the way I did. The sons voice would go up a few octaves because of no testicules and a much shorter penis. Oh yeah! he also couldn't talk with half of a tounge. The wife would have other things to worry about like a broken head and a few shots to the ass either a gun or large stick. The girl friend wouldn't have to be dealt with after learning about the octaves changes in the son. She'll just go away she can't help herself she's just dumb! Think about the people (veterans) who died so that you can be free to write this kinda of disrespectful things. Even if you not in the US the same goes.

Personally l'm insulted you you would think so poorly of veterans to put this to type!!

I wonder what they write about in other non free countries.

This story seems to be pretty controversial. I didn't like the disrespecting of the wounded vet but seeing as it's a fantasy story I am willing to overlook it. I am a huge fan of incestuous threesomes so that was pretty awesome. However I do wholeheartedly agree with one of the previous comments about pregnancy. Kristen should've been pregnant a million times over by the time this chapter was over. And what was the purpose of having the little sister Cassie? She was just ignored by Kristen the whole time. And then what's with the grandmother? Why is she such an asshole to a WOUNDED VETERAN?!? That part was ridiculous. All in all I liked the story, but it's not something I would read again. 4/5