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Jeez, talk about a sad reality.

I love the way your smooth, rolling details, make me feel like I am really there. To me your stories are (Written Pictures)

a truly outstanding effort. Congratulations!

Paris Waterman

It's a pity it is going to get another 'hot' rating because it ain't hot its beyond that

Its LITERATE

The images evoked through this story are so heartbreakingly realistic that they have stayed with me since I first read it. A sad and moving vignette ... beautifully written. MC

Very sad and all too real. I like your work very much!

I've got a tight knot of fear and pain in my stomach as a result of this story. My heart ached for the little girl, for her mother. I wanted to jump on the man and tear at him with my nails when he laughed after using her like a whore and throwing the bag at her. What was in the bag? Money? Drugs?

Congratulations to you.

Oh god but this story made me hurt, made me ache for the little girl, and for her mother. The sad thing is that this story is all too real...

Strong and moving work. Very well written.

A realistic sadness & brutality of life. A daughter’s love of her Mom.

and sweet. Very well-written. Will there be more?

I’m not sure if that is the right word to use here.

A thought-provoking story that, unashamedly, left me with tears in my eyes.

My best wishes.