All Comments on 'Monet Straps It On For Me'

A few minor grammatical issues is the only thing I can point to in a criticizing way... Really enjoyed the story, and appreciated the build-up before the bed. It was as if the writer is teasing to start the story in the same manner Karen enjoys teasing others. Thanks for writing and I look forward to checking out some of your other stories.

This makes me wish I were a woman!