by BlewWater69
So many unfinished stories on here, far too many sadly............
Seems incomplete, where is chapter 3?
egarly waiting
I am now eagarly waiting for next chapter.
You have to continue on with this series it is way too good to just stop it here!!!
When is the next chapter going to come out ??
You seem to have a knack for writing good stories without ending them. Get with the programm and finish them!
Poor grammer; unrealistic, too.
great story u have got to write another part though
theirs got to be a sequal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!