All Comments on 'Monster Breed Ch. 01'

Very good start hope we don't have to wait to long for part 2

An alright start, don't like the protagonist so far though, hitting on another person's girlfriend is an asshole move, especially if said girl keeps telling you to buzz off.

trying too fool people to read this crap.

a succubus is a female demon, not a male. Try incubus.

if you meant to tetx "incubus" and made a mistake then bo-hoooo... but if you made no mistake, I'd rather you explain this odd "male turns into succubus" thing because it freaking makes no sense.

gay? okay I am closing the bible now *cautiously moves on*

period