by RiversEdge2010
Looking at your posting dates you are probably long gone, still I felt it worth mentioning that this is one great story, only pity is it ended before this lovely threesome got into more butt stuff ;)
You have a knack for writing, the story despite being somewhat implausible feels real, so do the characters. And the sex is just amazing, the scenes are long and hot just as it should be :P
If you ever go back to writing I'll definitely be there to read it.