All Comments on 'Moonshadows Ch. 07'

does rafe not get it or is he just stupid? she was bled and fed a vamps blood so she should be turning to a vamp. she is already showing the signs like the bloody meat.this is getting to be just boring with them wanting to be together ,but not getting it done and a vamp wanting revenge so he kidnaps the girl to get it.

Unless more than one exchange is needed in this story. This is twilight-song's story. We're just along for the ride. Having said that, good to have you back. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hoping for a happy ending for Selene and a stake and burning sun for Cassius... if those will get rid of him permanently of course.

Selene can't become a vampire if she feeds from one. She has to be injected and then must die to come back as one.

K can't wait to read this next chapter. Its been a great twist. Can't wait to see what rafe does. K bet be is alpha.

I read this story and completely forgot about the first 6 chapters and feel there is happening too little for such a long wait in between. Don´t try to give us a lot more chapters but finish the story instead. It really gets boring, nothing happens - it jus takes a lot of time.

Screw off.

The authors on this site will finish at their own respective paces - don't try to impose yours on them.

Fascinating story...

Even in the fiction of the story, the natural pace makes it more enjoyable. .. in my own stories I force myself to go yo places where I may not want to go... or others may not want me to... but, it is my story... it's my heart and brain concocting it..

Only I can complete it...

And so are you... me ?

Enjoying the ride and now having reached the latest chapters , will have to endure the painful wait until you let us back into your universe...

Daniel

I only found your story today, but I'm sorry to say I'm done with it. Didn't like the turn it took in the last chapter and this one just seems to be dragging, its gotten boring.

Just to say I think this story's brilliant and its getting more exciting with each chapter. I don't understand why people seem to be pissed off with it.

I'm off now to Ch 8 and hopefully more soon!!!!