All Comments on 'More Father/Daughter Bonding'

by HotGrrrl69

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Disgusting/Shitty Plot

Story belongs under "Anal"

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
re: Disgusting/Shitty Plot

No it doesn't. When deciding on a category, incest trumps everything else.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
needs more

needs more detail, you skim over stuff much too fast

good ideas but you dont get enough raunch out of them

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 13 years ago
I'm sure if don read the other chapters it will make sense

Is a shame about that comment because now this author is disillusioned and will not finish this series, and submit anything else, that is a real shame.

VioletBlairVioletBlairover 13 years ago
hey! keep going!!!

the story keeps getting great, why'd u stop? please keep going, it was really hot and sexy and made me soooo wet, please?!

tazz317tazz317over 4 years ago
THE ONLY THING FOR THESE GIRLS TO ATTEND CLASS

would be to educate the teachers and classmates, TK U MLJ LV NV

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