All Comments on 'More Likely in This Economy'

story was bad typos horrible seemed like first part of a series no follow up to it story seemed discombobulated <-(not sure a real word) a high school freshman prolly could of written it better. For gods sake im drunk and made no sense to me and i LOVE tentacle/alien rape stories. My advice is read some other stories in this/these catagories and try again sorry wish review could be brighter

Write more please!!! Alot more!!!!