All Comments on 'More than a Ghost Ch. 01'

An interesting take on an old theme. The original novel (H.G.Wells, as I recall) is over 100 years old. And various movies have been produced on this storyline. Nevertheless, this version is off to a most entertaining start. I look forward to the next chapter.

You write well, intrigue and suspense holding my attention. Thank you.

Ron

I liked this story and look forward to your next chapter. Can't wait to see what and who the ghost does next.

An absorbing tale, with the characters well drawn. This is an author with talent. I await more.

The trouble this guy could get upto :-).

Awesome story. Just the best.

Enjoyed ch 1 more than ch 2 the innocent abandon of the young amy was very hot.the build up with the jogging conection led nicely into the later sex .it brought back that feeling of sex when it is new and excitement waiting at every step .

In chapt2 liked the tease on the lecture stage .very hot ,didnt feel that he recieved the orhasm he deserved from her,the whole deal with his wife didnt sit well with me.it could be that his reactions were natural .it just didnt read well for me.and could not figure out what his real emotions were for his wife,other than him being turned on seeing her with someone else and enjoying punishing her.all in all enjoyed the stories and love the topic