All Comments on 'More Than Just a Fairy Tale Ch. 23'

by Jaisen

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katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago
More family?

Besides the babies, I mean. How cool is it to discover long lost family. It looks like everything is working out after the news fiasco, but it would only take one stubborn reporter bent on revenge to have everything unravel again.

lucianloverlucianloverover 12 years ago
I really,really love you!!!!

I always get a nice fuzzy feeling when I read your stories.

I've always wanted to ask this question though.......does a human having sex with a werewolf constitute bestiality LOL?!!!!!!!

mikothebabymikothebabyover 12 years ago
again you have done it

I adore your story. It is never a let down, always leaves me feeling warm and fuzzy. I want to join that family. lol

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
loved this chapter

great chapter can not wait for the next one

GimletEdgeGimletEdgeover 12 years ago
Wonderful wolf talk.

I'm rereading the series and had forgotten how much wolven dialog you had written into this chapter. It was delightful to have all the mates checking up on one another after lengthy runs. For anyone who enjoys a good wolf novel, this story is sublime.

hakdrakkenhakdrakkenabout 12 years ago

Simple, but that ending was awesome.

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