All Comments on 'Morning Playtime 04'

More plz!

You did a poor job on this one. You did a poor job of introducing the characters in this one. Who is Charlie? Who is Tuck? How does he know what people are saying while watching them through a telescope?

Wonderful story....I would like to say something though---as a woman I can honestly say that not everyone knows how to finger fuck. It's the same as regular fucking...not everyone knows how to do it.

But the story is great. Please add more chapters.

You are correct - I did some editing and failed to properly reference the name uses. I had intended to add "scene-separators" between Charlie's POV and Tuck's POV. I write in Open Office and it puts in weird lines I don't like. I flat forgot to go back and add them in.

Did you miss the first installment? The intercourse is in there. Was I not obvious enough with it?