All Comments on 'Motes of Dust'

by NinthArcana

Sort by:
  • 4 Comments
AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
It started quite well ....

... and then you did what I absolutely hate!!

You tried to make out that I - "the Reader" - was a participant.

Because I KNOW that I was not there and did not take part your story immediately destroys whatever credibility it had started to accrue.

Result?

The time I've just spent reading to this point is time wasted!

Rawmaster50Rawmaster50over 9 years ago
Ah, memories

Yes I recall doing things like this with a new home and the wife who loved the experience. Thank you 4 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

undergarment! really, u used that word

kylesgirl92kylesgirl92over 9 years ago

I have been looking for some stories like this without names. That way i can imagine my husband and me in them easier. :) very delightful!

Anonymous
Our Comments Policy is available in the Lit FAQ
Post as:
Anonymous