by patchat
This is a cut and paste job! I read this story 10 years ago. Learn to write for yourself, you fucking hack.
went from nine to ten inches in a few paragraphs if the story was longer it'd be 14 by the end
decent story, but somehow your cock was 9 inches in the pool and 10 inches in the room......
with a red bush!! Interesting. Sindoor in the wrong place I imagine. Even copy-paste needs some thought behind it.
I think you have a decent start. There are a few mistakes, but nothing to stop writing about. I would like to know what happens next.
First published in Nix*Pix BBS many years ago. This is almost a complete copy except the names Sharon and Lisa have been changed.
Most of these stories revolve around women with impossibly huge breasts (40DDDD or something) but this one broke the believability record for big dicks! Human penis length is NOT 9 inches. Only .02 percent (that's 2 in 10,000) have a dick longer than 8 inches! In fact, the normal distribution of penis length is just UNDER SIX INCHES.
I tried to like the story but with the women's names so similar, I found it confusing.