by flim62
Brilliant story, well-written and paced. Can hardly wait for the next chapter. Some guys have all the luck !
Well written, not to long & believable. I realize fantasy but not so off the wall like many which is just totally unbelievable. Looking forward to Chapter 2
If the daughter likes to see her mother satisfied by a man who will be as good to her mother as he is to her; this could be great.