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68dawg68dawgover 12 years ago
Weirdly like Jane Austen

You've got your insensitive cad, your inappropriate relationships. Though maybe a bit more like Trollope. The dialog needs to be a bit sharper tho. "It is a universal truth that a single man with a large fortune is in need of a wife. " or a large something.

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