by showher
Great story, well paced. Looking forward to the next part. I was really turned on reading it.
but in another way, it seems like the main character doesn't really care that his mother fucked around; nor does he seem to care whether he was father by the man he called father all his life. <p>
now, if two married people decided to have a certain "life style," like the man and his wife, i have no problem. <p>
but cheating on a spouse? sure, it does sound "exciting" because it is illicit sex, but aren't there consequences, of both medical and social dimenions? <p>
but, hey, carry on! as the smart ones here say, i'm just jealous, so don't mind me! LOL
More of this please ,more description of them making love would add to this already good story.
Use words that you feel comfortable with.That way the comical mistakes like seamen in place of semen won't happen. Just use seed or sperm!
When you're trying to turn the reader on, making them laugh out loud ruins the mood. 3/5 stars
Either constructive or other wise. A great story for those of us who love mother/son incest. Thank you for writing.
erotic but not pornographic. I liked the story. I like Max's mom big time. If i ever met her, I'd ask her out even if i knew about her lover(s) and the incest. Women like Max's mom must be forgiven for fooling around and for the incest.
I like when son mom stories are sex stories and love stories and jack-off fantasies, that is 3-in-one! This one met the criteria.
"She raised her hips to meet my thrust as the first rope of seamen exploded into her belly!"
But as written, it sounds very uncomfortable.