All Comments on 'Mother's Helping Hand Ch. 02'

Really really enjoying this story so far. Love the fact it isn't moving too fast either.

If it carries on at this level of quality it is going to be the best thing ive read on here since the 'Measuring my cum' series which was just amazing.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Looking forward to chapter 3. Thanks

send chapter 3 soon! Can't wait for him to suck those bit tits and fuck her.

Good story. Hopefully the next chapter will have actual sex and not just teasing.

continue with the slow pace ..

dont hurry up the sex between them..its good ..

shower incident was really hot

Google "Mom's Healing Love" and you can read the whole thing almost word for word, no need to wait for Ch 3 to be posted.

This guy is used to one of the Indian forums where they wait forever for short installments of text..

Two favors, please don't make us wait too long, and please don't drag it out. You really have a good story here...

The slow build up s waaaay better. The son trying to take advantage of his situation is a better and more realistic story

We are still waiting with baited breath...

That was not nice leaving so abruptly. Do not make us wait for the continuing saga...

Hello all,

Just to let you know I am almost finished with chapter 3, it just needs

editing and submitting.

I appreciate your comments about brevity and this will be a

longer update. Poor Bobby finally gets put out of his misery,

at least for now, but this story has another 7-8 chapters to go

so prepare for a LOT more to cum.

As always please leave your comments and ratings

DS

I like the pace to your story unlike some of the other comments. You've done a good job developing the characters in a relatively short time frame. The ending in chapter two may have been abrupt, but that just keeps us looking forward to the next part.

Thanks for sharing.

... 5 stars (each).

Very erotic and extremely sexy and taboo. Excellent work.. Write MORE please?

Excellent! Only thing I wish was that there was more of the vivid description of what it felt like. Chapter 1s description of her pulling his foreskin back for example.

Couldn't stop playing with myself through Chapter 2 love how you explain his stolen glimpses of his mothers body , I got quite light headed as I felt my orgasm erupt , thanks keep up the great work 😀

The way you explained this happening, has a reality feeling with it. This could have really happened, not just in fiction. Great writing.