All Comments on 'Mother's Red Shoes'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

My 68 yo mother teases me wearing a red leather miniskirt dress black nylons 6 “ heels her huge jugs flopping out of her top mom smoking cigarettes asking do you want to fuck mommy fuck my highs and ass fuck your mother I love to unload my cum up mothers asshole

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago

fucking love this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Love the story of the red shoes

The high heels and sexy dialog had me wet in my pantyhose and panties. Mom too enjoyed the incestuous story of the red shoes and the other details of the most incredible incestuous and naughty but nice hot and deliciously perverted hot action.

shoeslayershoeslayerover 9 years ago
Good story

I really enjoyed it but I do think 'Why the magic "

is right. Hell. . . if my mother wore a pair of patent red

or black heels and did things with them to get me

hard, that's all the magic I'd need. keep writing !

Pilot4029Pilot4029almost 10 years agoAuthor
Thank you!

For the lovely comments anonymous! Feel free to message me.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Little red riding heels

Mmmmmm, looking forward to reading ch 2 hun. Slipping into my red 5 inch strappy sandals now. I have a shy young son to tease.

mamasboy10mamasboy10almost 13 years ago

love my 72 y o mother wearing nylons 6" spike high heels to bed

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago

Jesus! What a fucking hot story. I hope the rest is as good as this has promised!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Why the magic?

Very good. But it would be still better without the shoes having a magic power. Nice red shoes shouldn't need to be magic to give the son a big hard on when he'd see his mother wearing them!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Excellent!

Fabulous story! Attaboy! I love the slow pace, could have been even closer!

Kristin (yes, a mom)

AhabscribeAhabscribealmost 15 years ago
Magical Indeed!

A lovely, lyrical piece of erotica. I would love to see it continued, but will treasure it as is. Well done!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
A fantasy of magic in the new shoes

I enjoyed the story, it would have been better if her son fucked her instead of sometime later. Maybe another chapter would keep the story going and make it hotter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
JAHBDS.!

Just another "Huge Big Penis story - I quit when I got to that part, ruins the whole story.!*

motherfucker74motherfucker74almost 15 years ago
I didn't care for it much

I think the reason why is it falls into the realm of "magical" which isn't my kind of story. If I am right, that is probably why I didn't like it. There are very few "magical" stories I like. I guess the story is okay but I really started to breaze it at some point for it was losing my interest fast.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Fantastic beginning.

Great start to what should be a great story. i enjoyed reading this story & I can't wait to read the next chapter. There will be another chapter won't there?

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