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All Comments on 'Mother's Ruin'

by RomanCEisdead2

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Kary_MKary_Mover 16 years ago
great stuff

Totally unbelievable, but really enjoyable. Just couldn't stop reading. Keep up the good work.

K

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Another good story

Keep them coming

FaeLinaFaeLinaover 16 years ago
lacking just a bit

in the ending. It seems to abrupt. You have this wonderful buildup, great character developement, then, you fall flat at the end. Other then that...WONDERFUL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Excellent story, muddled ending . . .

This is a first rate story. As a suggested improvement I would simply excise the last paragraph, starting with "John and Natalie changed." Sometimes less is more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Enjoyed it

Silly story but still enjoyed it,

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Umm, I guess that this update is the same as the last, and the one before that and the one before that and now the one before that!; I'm afraid it's taken far too long to get around to writing another story, having started it earlier this year. Alas, I have a number of pastime...