All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 02 Ch. 01'

A great start for book 2. I can't wait to see where it goes. I enjoy the feel of the story. Keep up the good work!

Mouse wants Michael to marry her the dream said it all, marry they off to happiness.

In terms of pure sex, this is much more simmering than the roiling broil of the last book, but it's great work, none the less. Interesting characters making mistakes, with vivid accounts of their (well, throughout this one, Mouse's) flaws, undercurrents and misgivings. As gonzo porn it bites, but as a deep story of love, lust and consequences it's awesome.

I'm so in love with this story!

I love this one! It really shows Mouse a a real person, not just the perfect fantasy lover. She seems to have real feelings and insecurities just like the rest of us. She's a gal I can relate to.

Keep up the great work. I can't wait to read more.

I loved the bit at the end, it really shows how much Mouse loves Michael. I can't wait to see what you've got going in Chapter 3.

What a story!!

Absolute CRAP!!