All Comments on 'Mouse Bk. 04 Ch. 03'

I love this series. I can't wait to read more when you get round to finishing this story. Thank you author.

The new angles are fun, and completely fitting that Mouse would manipulate her sister in such a devious way. Looking forward to the ongoing saga. Thanks, Rob!

Oh the sibling rivalry. I love it. It ads a new element. I can't wait to see where this goes.

I liked the series, it just lacked a little bit of depth. Meaning at the end - Mel and Michael's relationship. In the future, I'd like to see feelings thought out in each other's head's....and I'm sure the parent's are catching on that something is going on, will all hell break loose? ......Yes, a conclusion to all things would be nice. Do the conclusion and I'll happily give you a 100.

Great series, great stories. Want more, more, more.....

I assume Mona is gunna regret creating the monster that is her older sisters lust for Michael,lol Bring on the other parts! xD

I love this series, I can't wait for the final chapters, but I just hope that Melanie does not get involved with Micheal while Mona is away....I love Mona/Micheal together it's very hot.......c

when are you going to finish it.

Just finished reading the entire story so far. It's been a wonderful story so far. Mouse is just so devilish. Sex is ingrained in her DNA I think. Can't wait for the final books.

Are you going to finish the series? It is great but it has been almost a year and nothing new. Lets go already!!! haha

It's evident Melanie is going to have trouble keeping her hands off of Michael. Michael is going to have his hands full trying to keep Melanie at arm's length.

I've really enjoyed this

I've read I normally read Daddy daughter story's

It's made night shifts so much better you get real talent keep it up

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Mouse is really a manipulating bitch. No way Michael was uneasy, not sleeping, or a wreck. As well as finally not giving Michael a complete blowjob, all could have been learned with cucumber Michael. I really don't see the meaning of it.

Michael is actual more and more a spineless cuckolding mouse slave.

Melanie is the most normal of them all, has power enough to not succumb to cheating anymore.

All by all disappointed.